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A Poem by Ash

I love to show this poem off.

I'm an unfinished rainbow.
Sometimes I shine, but mostly I'm a cloud of grey.
My bad days ain't days, what?
They're weeks, like mentally lasting months and lifeless days.
My work is always terrible, unless I really try.
A virgo is supposed to be a perfectionist
But I'm failing at everyday tasks mentally
Happiness is a moment, I may remember
But depression is a day that I'll never forget.
The long lasting insecurities are always a Diamond But always had my confidence levels higher
Than I am on cloud nine.

© 2014 Ash

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The last two lines are the best, we should never give up, no matter what. The time is always not good but it'll not remain bad too. Happiness and sadness are two sides of our life, one follows the other. So just stay strong and live on...
Thank you for sharing...:)

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Added on December 2, 2014
Last Updated on December 10, 2014
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