The Beautiful Mermaid

The Beautiful Mermaid

A Poem by Hiroshi Masters

The Beautiful mermaid

Down below the blue ocean,

She sung a perfect melody

I am captivated by her sound

Attracted by her sweet tone

Wanted to search for her

Gently kisses her lips

Envisioning her body

I wanted to hold her tight

I dived into the ocean floor

Seeing her sitting alone,

Discovered she's a mermaid

She turns her head and smile

While I hold my breath,

I can't blink my eyes

For she wanted to kiss,

I stared at her blue eyes

While she was humming

Later, I blacked out

I awoken on the shore

Thinking I might be insane

A bright light on my palm,

Realized left a crystal bracelet

Thought I was in a dream

She could be the real woman

Someday we'll meet again

The beautiful mermaid...

© 2015 Hiroshi Masters


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What a great poem! You'll meet again some day!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Love this poem, especially as I love mermaids. It reads so well it could be a story, the words you've used paint a picture I can see clearly in my mind. My favourite line is: "Thinking I might be insane ,A bright light on my palm, Realized left a crystal bracelet ". The tone changes so well between the subject thinking they may be mad to seeing a brightness in the dark, a crystal. Lovely work x

Posted 4 Years Ago


great write,and a lifelong search

Posted 4 Years Ago


Hiroshi Masters

4 Years Ago

thank you so much! yeah it does.. :D

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Added on November 17, 2015
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Tags: mermaid, true love, dream, fantasy

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Hiroshi Masters
Hiroshi Masters

Bulacan, Philippines



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I love writing and telling stories. Because you can express yourself and let people think about what you write and maybe inspired them. It's what I wanted to do, I started writing little Journals in m.. more..

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