Wonderful Wonders

Wonderful Wonders

A Poem by Holly O'Brien

I looked into her eyes today
and I felt a tinge of sweetness
wrapping around my tongue
so tight I couldn't speak
of all the words inside of me

Rest that beautiful smile
Remember that cautious glimpse
Takes my mind for a stroll
Through the back-doors of my heart
And a breath escapes me when I awake

A lust so haunting
It carries my soul and brings it back
A feeling so young
It can only be new
Maybe it's my heart knocking

Head leaned back
eyes closed against the sunset
I can only wish for a chance
for a moment that seems impossible
But it's a chance that seems inevitable




© 2010 Holly O'Brien


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What a wonderfully written piece of work. The chances you wish upon. The first stanza really crawled into my heart. The second made my mind smile, the third gave way to a heat and happiness inside, and the last made goose pimples rise along my thankful skin! Wonderfully written, beautiful!

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Wow…
Wonderful…brein….
A short poem that captured the entire strength of your longing…
Loved it so much….


Posted 9 Years Ago


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Someone in your life has greatly affects you..
making you lean to
nice poem:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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What a way with words you do have! Wrapping around my tongue - Indeed! Beautifully written, and I can't help but love it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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oo wow!! this one is bloody brilliant Holly!! the images are great - back-door of the heart - it all just flows effortlessly telling the story of sadness - the chance that cannot be had!! nice!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a wonderfully written piece of work. The chances you wish upon. The first stanza really crawled into my heart. The second made my mind smile, the third gave way to a heat and happiness inside, and the last made goose pimples rise along my thankful skin! Wonderfully written, beautiful!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Ooooh, I love this!

and I felt a tinge of sweetness
wrapping around my tongue -- beautifully written...

This is a very sweet piece - full of wistfulness and longing, that much is clear. I do hope you get that chance....

Posted 9 Years Ago


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great

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I completely agree, its so beautiful. Its precisely the way you would want an old lover to look at you and just what you would want them to think. This is really good, kudos!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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A lust so haunting
It carries my soul and brings it back
A feeling so young
It can only be new
Maybe it's my heart knocking

I love these words here, this is a wonderful write
it is so full of emotion.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Holly O'Brien
Holly O'Brien

Macon, Georgia



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Well I was born and raised in Nassau, Bahamas but I currently reside in Macon, Georgia where I attend college (IT major). Writing has always been my passion and it always will be. A very good friend .. more..

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