A Nursery Crime...Georgie Porgie

A Nursery Crime...Georgie Porgie

A Poem by Gee
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Olde English nursery rhyme updated

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Georgie Porgie pudding and pie
kissed the girls and made them cry,
the police were called, statements sought,
a danger deemed, he must be caught.

Within the hour he was found
roughly cuffed, punched to the ground,
put in a car, thrown in a cell,
denied a brief so he couldn't tell.

Confused and with a low IQ
Georgie knew what he would do,
and when they opened up his door
he lay there dead upon the floor.

Now the police themselves 'midst public fury,
will face a trial and a twelve man jury.

© 2018 Gee


Author's Note

Gee
This is an olde English nursery rhyme dragged into the 21st century,hopefully

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Wouldn't I love to see this pop up in our papers?
Well done, Sir.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Gee

2 Years Ago

Thank you MJS
another goodie....................

Posted 4 Years Ago


Gee

4 Years Ago

Thank You Dave
Love this, wish I had thought of it! Witty and profound. You should do more. I will keep an eye out.

Great.

Moomin

Posted 5 Years Ago


Gee

5 Years Ago

Thank you. Have had a go at little miss muffet and humpty.
Thank you
Poor old Georgie Porgie Puddin and Pie, what a way for him to die. A nursery rhyme, that nowadays leaves a bit of a sour taste. People with low IQ and mental health problems deserve a bit more understanding, although of course the public need protection too. It's a question of good old common sense not a case of wielding a sledge hammer to crack a peanut. Well written Gee.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


Gee

5 Years Ago

Thank you Christine
Poor old Georgie Porgie he didn't really mean to make the cry
All he wanted was a kiss and a feel
They made it sound he had a meal



Posted 5 Years Ago


Gee

5 Years Ago

Lol, cheers..
Haven't heard the classic, a little puzzled

Posted 5 Years Ago


Gee

5 Years Ago

Easily accessed if you would have liked to read.
Thank you
Wild Rose

5 Years Ago

You must find it Elaine
Extremely well constructed and a good laugh combined. I love this sort of writing, can't say as a youngster that I admired Georgie Porgie, all though I was a fan of Pudding. Good work thanks for sharing. Rod.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Gee

5 Years Ago

Thank you for commenting Rod
An interesting play on a classic. Bravo!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Gee

6 Years Ago

Hi Kelly, hope you are well. Thank you
I like this very much.. such a clear comment on the times we live..

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gee

6 Years Ago

Thank you Olla
I enjoyed the new version. But a sad ending for Georgie. Thank you Gee for sharing the nursery rhyme..
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Gee

6 Years Ago

Cheers Coyote

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Added on December 27, 2014
Last Updated on March 16, 2018
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Milton keynes, United Kingdom



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