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Give me to the summer breeze

Give me to the summer breeze

A Poem by Gee
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One final walk together An oldie updated 28/02/20

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It's time my love you lived again
removed the widow's black,
leave sorrow for all yesterday's
invite happiness "come back"

So don a dress of pastel hues
paint a smile upon your face,
walk me for a last time dear
to my final resting place.

Take me to the highest hill
give me to the summer breeze,
to gently fall on lush green grass
'neath the shade of aged trees.

Then take your leave, live again
let another share your heart,
as I will love for eternity,
we will never truly part.

And finally, if e'er the chance,
come sit, talk, reminisce,
not though please with falling tears
but with smiles and a whispered kiss.










© 2020 Gee


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A great sad lament and a great read, well written and heart felt

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Thank you..
Why do you need lo be left?
Trust me a genius piece of art

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

If only :)
Thanks for having a read and commenting, very much appreciated
A soft blown kiss each Autumn by the garden wall or high up on a hill where we feel an autumn 🍂 chill. Beautiful poem. truly, Pat

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Thank you patricia
Very nice. You have redeemed yourself in my critical, exacting eyes;the eyes of--(DUN DUN DUN)...an English Major...


sorry. High.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Gee

2 Years Ago

Cheers Angel :)
angel

2 Years Ago

Hey, man! I say again, nice job! A little lower now...
That is truly beautiful. That is exactly how I would love it. Back to nature. And them not mourning me. But walking away with a smile.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Dawn

2 Years Ago

So Gee, I did not think it was shite! The total opposite in fact. :)
Gee

2 Years Ago

Thank you..
Dawn

2 Years Ago

Your very welcome. I really was lovely. :)
This is how intimate loss should be written about.

It's quite touching in a universally familiar way. This poem works in a fundamental way... and that my friend is no small feat.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Gee

2 Years Ago

Thanks David. I think the world would be a far better place if we all would express our love for fam.. read more
Nicely sculpted and touching
Thank you for sharing "Smiles"

Posted 2 Years Ago


Gee

2 Years Ago

Cheers Uday
So touching!Beautifully written!Well done!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Gee

2 Years Ago

Thank you Ms P
This just left a lump in my throat Gee after reading. Beautifully done. It flowed nicely and sounded good reading it out loud. Well done. Good morning.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Gee

2 Years Ago

Good afternoon Christine, thank you
Christine Anne Shaw

2 Years Ago

Good afternoon Gee.
This just left a soft and calm spot in my heart

Posted 2 Years Ago


Gee

2 Years Ago

Thank you Markus

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Added on July 8, 2015
Last Updated on February 29, 2020
Tags: love, life, death, ashes

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Gee
Gee

Milton keynes, United Kingdom



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