Briefly paused the world that day..

Briefly paused the world that day..

A Poem by Gee
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Simple words..3rd anniversary of mums passing today 09/04/22

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Even though tides still ebb and flow,
nights cede to day and seasons change,
the one true constant wanted, needed,
is now naught but raw, emotional, memories,
that bring tears when least expected.

Angela Marguerite Muirhead 04/12/1936 - 09/04/2019

© 2022 Gee


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lovely poetic words gee.
you must've had a wonderful relationship with such a special mum to have wonderful lingering memories.
not everyone is that lucky, mine is going to 99 in august this year, but I won't be putting pen to paper when she passes.

cheerio carola

ps. i read your comment on patricia’s poem ‘Sorrow Spills Red’ & i totally agree with you regarding ukraine.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Such a late thank you, apologies...Thank you
everything changes except the memories I keep in my heart, not always pleasant ones but sometimes painful ones...they seem to remain, with tears in my eyes. Soft and heartfelt poem Gee.
Best, B

Posted 2 Years Ago


Gee

2 Years Ago

Thank you Betty
Lovely Gee.. Creative and so thoughtful.
Lisa

Posted 2 Years Ago


Gee

2 Years Ago

Thank you Lisa
Aw, how much she is missed. How the eyes still water when the memories flood in. Touching words Gee, heartfelt and beautiful.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


Gee

2 Years Ago

Thank you Christine. You'd better staple your wig to your head as we are due high winds :))
H.. read more
No rhyme or reason to mourning, we put on the brave face mask, for the sake of others and those unfathomable rules of propriety, while our light is on with no sign of anyone being home, lost in the eternal moments where what were once such beautiful memories of times shared crumble us into never quite full submission, leaving only the hollow ache of loss.
Perfectly stated Gee. Those simple words of yours must come from Ronseal... Does what it says on the tin, to perfection.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Gee

2 Years Ago

Thanks Lorry.
I'm shite when it comes to dealing with grief, more so with other folks.
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I loveee this! Even the title caught my eyes! Nice work Gee :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Gee

4 Years Ago

Thank you Tina
My heart goes out to you--I lost my dad two years ago and it's been really, really hard. I admire your ability to write at all--I had to take a total creative break when I lost him.

I don't know if you intended this, but the way none of your lines rhyme, it feels really despondent. It's heart-breaking, both in the structure and the subject. Again, my heart is with you.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Gee

4 Years Ago

In so sorry for your loss. Thank you
Tears are good, they help the healing, she would tell you that i am sure ♥

Posted 4 Years Ago


Gee

4 Years Ago

Apologies for the late thank you Stella
Gee,
Indeed you will feel this way for a awhile . . . lost my mother 32 years ago to Ca. Yet time doth heal.
Thanks for this reminder around Mother's Day.
Tom

Posted 4 Years Ago


Gee

4 Years Ago

Thanks Tom, appreciate your words.
My oh my, what a gently, loving tribute this is, Gee. Such beautiful words for a beautiful woman. And they make you very much and more, her son. Sad days for you and your family but, wrap around your memories, my friend - they'll hug you slowly better.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Gee

4 Years Ago

Ladies of a certain age should leave the digging, bending, barrowing, weeding, to younger folk, and .. read more
emmajoy

4 Years Ago

Almost forty is a certain age, is it?! Humph! And there was I hoping to become part of the glitter.. read more
Gee

4 Years Ago

Lol..........

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