A living death then life

A living death then life

A Poem by Gee
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Perhaps :)

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What then once futile life is done
is there a place to head,
or is this it, no more, no less
an eternity as dead.
No, surely once we're done were not
that's when the fun begins,
when all we hoped but never gained
is got whilst fatty sings.

© 2021 Gee


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Yes, is there a place to head and not an eternity as dead? After my husband passed away six years ago, I was comforted by a song he wrote. Here's a short part of it:
On the other side
On the other side
I've a home in glory
On the other side

On the other side
On the other side
There'll be no pain or sorrow
On the other side

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Gee

2 Weeks Ago

How lovely :)
I wonder if my words will be read once I've popped my clogs.
Thank you
Shelley Warner

2 Weeks Ago

You're welcome, and yes your words will be read.
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Posted 1 Month Ago


This is dark but then it gets...
I hope you're right.

When the fun begins, I hope I see you there.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Gee

1 Month Ago

Hopefully not in the near future Dave :)
Hope you are keeping well.
Cheers
i love it!
i'm with "that's when the fun begins".
when it's my turn I'm sure going to try & come back as something or other... a bird, cat or an insect, whatever & play little pranks on people by moving objects around. hahaha! I'll enjoy that.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Gee

1 Month Ago

Hi Carola, thank you
Hello my friend. I liked the logic of the words written.
"No, surely once we're done were not
that's when the fun begins,
when all we hoped but never gained
is got whilst fatty sings."
The above lines. So wonderful and so honest. Maybe we can't be done till we find the final sleep? Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


Gee

1 Month Ago

Thank you Coyote, hope you are keeping well
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

I am doing well and I hope you are doing well. You are welcome my friend.
This is brilliant
Reminds me of being in heaven
Listening to the underdog sing the songs to the Crowds
People who never got a chance in this life get their turn in the next
Love it


Posted 1 Month Ago


Gee

1 Month Ago

Thanks Julie, hope all is well with you
The fat lady sings, it is all over...
I have wondered this same thing....is there something after this...or do we just go into the ground or into ash and that's it....
kind of sad if that is true...
nothing to look forward to....except worms.
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Hello, Gee! :)
War is peace
Freedom is slavery
Ignorance is strength
Death is birth? I think it fits the pattern. Haha
Every moment of life is yours, and each of those moments is an eternity if you measure it with a small enough ruler, so live this life like you plan to in whatever paradise is waiting for you. Are you going to keep your pants on at the great orgy in the hereafter, or are you going to grab that fatty and make her sing? Haha


Posted 2 Months Ago


Gee

2 Months Ago

Cheers Matt, hope you are well
Now wouldn't that be something Gee if this life was just a dress rehearsal for the next? I'm an optimist but I think that might be stretching it too far. However I'm all with science. Show me the science and I could be swayed. An interesting little poem which will create must debate. Hope all is well with you.

Chris

Posted 2 Months Ago


Gee

2 Months Ago

Hi Christine, all good. I'm a "once you're dead you're dead" kinda guy :)
Thank you
Chris Shaw

2 Months Ago

You know, I'm that sort of gal too. The afterlife is for dreamers:)
ahahaha yes well...when she sings she sings don't she!? nice blend of defeatism and humor sir! I believe the true goal in the material world lay beyond death's door ... holding to it changes ones perspective and actions sharply ;) peace and joy Gee .. joy and health
E.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Gee

2 Months Ago

Hi E, cheers. Hope you are keeping well.
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2 Months Ago

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