Forever summer

Forever summer

A Poem by Gee
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13/08/21...Our dear friend Deb passed, the most bright and beautiful lady...forever summer in our hearts.

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She left whilst pastel colours reigned
before autumn made it's bow,
to rest in peace beyond this world
in the heavens an angel now.
And with her went the summer sun
blue skies turned grey as lead,
a silence came upon the birds
each flower bowed its head,
a gentle breeze it stirred the air
and sorrowfully said
"still every hand on every clock
for she's gone, she's gone, she's dead..."











© 2022 Gee


Author's Note

Gee
I will add to this, just wanted to post something as sitting here thinking of Deb

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The image of the clocks hands in its typical cadence saying the last line. So effective. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Gee

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks Frederick
Beautifully written and beyond affecting.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Gee

1 Month Ago

Thanks Travis, Deb is so missed.
Nature pays tribute to the dearly departed. I enjoyed reading this and how nature paid homage to your friend. Wonderfully done!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Gee

1 Month Ago

Thank you. Glad to enjoyed
Your imagery paints a sky sped up in sadness. Blue turns black and the sun hides its smile.

"before autumn made it's bow"

A sad but well written piece Gee. I hope you're well.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Gee

1 Month Ago

Best natural high Duff, laughter with loved ones and friends :))
Hope you are keeping well
duff

1 Month Ago

I agree with that. I am well and I appreciate our banter.
Gee

1 Month Ago

As I do :)
This is beautiful both in its message and the way it is written. By far my favorite of your poems I have read so far. It captures grief so well and the feeling of something beautiful being lost.

cricket 🦗

Posted 2 Months Ago


Gee

2 Months Ago

Thank you :)
though sad, your poem is beautifully written.
cheerio carola

Posted 2 Months Ago


Gee

2 Months Ago

Thank you Carola.
I love the way you leave, always has me smiling
I came on here to get my own back, but after reading this I'm too choked to write. Beautiful!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Gee

3 Months Ago

Cheers Bryan, Deb was the life and soul of life itself, a close friend for nigh on 45 years and the .. read more
Bryan Sefton

3 Months Ago

My wife was knocked by a car and really smashed up. That night I realised how empty life would be wi.. read more
Gee

3 Months Ago

I will have a read when back from the gym. Sorry to hear about your wife
An excellent write. Balanced and honest. I really enjoyed this work.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Gee

3 Months Ago

Hi Mark, thank you
such a heartfelt write here, sorry if you are missing someone.


Posted 3 Months Ago


Gee

3 Months Ago

Thank you :)

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Added on December 25, 2021
Last Updated on April 15, 2022
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Milton keynes, United Kingdom



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