Forever summer

13/08/21...Our dear friend Deb passed, the most bright and beautiful lady...forever summer in our hearts.

She left whilst pastel colours reigned
before autumn made it's bow,
to rest in peace beyond this world
in the heavens an angel now.
And with her went the summer sun
blue skies turned grey as lead,
a silence came upon the birds
each flower bowed its head,
a gentle breeze it stirred the air
and sorrowfully said
"still every hand on every clock
for she's gone, she's gone, she's dead..."

Author's Note

I will add to this, just wanted to post something as sitting here thinking of Deb

Reviews

[Pete]

wow. so deep. very emotional. amazing tribute. although sad, there is a serene beauty to it. just wow ... :)

[Gee]

Thank you Pete, a lady that will live in forever in the minds and hearts of all that were lucky enough to share her life.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

"another angel heaven gained,
and with her went the summer sun
blue skies turned grey as lead,
a silence came upon the birds
each flower bowed its head,"
So very sorry for your loss dear Gee. Yes, I believe as you superbly express, that nature mourns as we do when wonderful people pass. Your heartfelt, beautifully rhymed and laid words here, certainly reach up to Heaven to honor Deb's life and soul. I'm sure she is smiling and watching over you still...

[alanwgraham]

I'm very sorry for your loss Gee. Your poem has expressed very well how all the colour in life seems to have been turned off. They say that time heals all ills but I don't believe it.
Take care,
Alan

[Gee]

Thank you Alan.
Would have to be many, many moons rise and fall to heal the pain of Debs passing.

[Cherrie Palmer]

The title invites the reader to dragonflies and swimming holes with the hint of sorrow.
This is a lovely tribute.

[Gee]

Thank you Cherrie.
A tribute I wish with all my heart I had never had the need to write

[Cherrie Palmer]

Yes I completely understand.

[Kim S.]

such a wonderful, yet sad write... nicely written and emotional

[Gee]

Thank you kindly beckie

[Kim S.]

not a problem

[Toni.S]

Cute, play on words. Excellent!

[Gee]

Thank You Toni

[Patricia]

A beautiful piece to honor your friend. I am sorry for your loss dear Gee. May your memories be a blessing

[Gee]

Thanks Patricia, popping corks and laughter will be her memory

[DIVYA]

A beautiful poem that made me feel the loss, feel the earth grow dimmer and darker with the passing of a loved one. I appreciate how bereavement and the deep sense of loss has touched and so enriched your poetry. Thank you for sharing it with us.

[Gee]

Thank you for reviewing :)

[Lisasview]

Oh my fabulous Gee.
The last line made me cry..
Lisa

[Gee]

Thank you Lisa

[Lisasview]

You are so welcome Gee.

[Richard M]

A beautiful tribute. My condolences in your loss.
Richard

[Gee]

Thank you twice Richard.
Hope you are well