Every Start Stops

Every Start Stops

A Poem by Homason
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No Hope Lost.

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Every Start Stops!
Many, many along the way,
Child of God watch and pray,
Many, many have gone astray,
Clap for joy, no hope to fail. 

Ride on, ride on, see the end,
Faint not, sleep not, tell me when?
Amidst the way, all plans did fail,
Incomplete! Very frail,
And it all seem so,
Every star drops,
Every start stops.

- Homason.

© 2016 Homason


Author's Note

Homason
Lost in the physical, I feel invisible. Can we be grateful of nothing? Reviews please...

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What I understood from this poem was that to everything there is an end point.. Some may never think that anything will ever stop.. But in the end everything does..life, nature, us.. all of this will be forgotten or else vanish.. I find it disconcerting though.. I liked reading this though not sure if I interpreted it correctly...

Posted 7 Years Ago


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In every beginning there's an end, I observed. Beautifully drafted piece!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Homason

4 Years Ago

Thanks Futhy, love that name.... U should reconsider using it here.
Thankyou Farhan Shaikh for stopping by.

Posted 7 Years Ago


That wasn'nice..its just brilliant

Posted 7 Years Ago


poems are double edged swords Yumnakay, you interpeted this the best way I found it difficulty to portray to the reader....I feel you in my mind. thanks for you expensive time-review.

Posted 7 Years Ago


What I understood from this poem was that to everything there is an end point.. Some may never think that anything will ever stop.. But in the end everything does..life, nature, us.. all of this will be forgotten or else vanish.. I find it disconcerting though.. I liked reading this though not sure if I interpreted it correctly...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you Tan. I'm honoured...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very inspirational... Carefully crafted words and catchy title! Well done, Homason.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! Tony i'm flattered but encouraged. I hear of 'ear-warm.' Impresive review. Thanks.

Posted 7 Years Ago


God laughs when men make plans (probably not the whole or correct quote there).
The title really got into my brain like - you ever hear of a song that people call and 'ear-worm', that you can't get out of your head... that's what the title of this is doing at the minute in my head and it's great.
Thanks for posting this one Homason.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thanks Alison and Unique. Indeed, it sounds like a journey piloted by selfishness- what's the fate when hope is at stake...? But could there be more?

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on December 1, 2016
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Tags: Resentment, Wonder, Alarm, Nature, Torment, Absconment, Willingness, Hope, Vigor, Passion, Failure, Discouragement

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Homason
Homason

Port Harcourt, Christianity, Nigeria



About
Humble and friendly. Writer and composer. Author of the book "Before You Quit: A Recipe for Success." Likes to play football and table tennis. Upholds the Golden Rule. more..

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