PEELING OFF THE PRIDE OF MY SKIN

Just a quick poem about how the human race is the same..black,white,pink,or yellow...we still form a rainbow :-]

 

IM PEELING OFF THE PRIDE OF MY SKIN

JUST TO SHOW THAT WE ARE THE SAME WITHIN

TO JUDGE IS KNOWN A COMMON SIN

SO NO ONES A LOSER, WE ALL WIN!

Author's Note

ihope this touch you....*reaches out hands*

Reviews

[NebraskaHope]

I love this, it gives me hope in such A few words.

[Michael X]

this is a poem that adds value to understanding, and draws the reader
to ponder a sense of peace and harmony, you have talent, keep it up.

[Mauricio Montoya]

This is defiantly an insightful writer we should all heed.

[Babe Roxx]

I truly love the message in your poem, it shows the kindness of your heart and the person you are.

[Allie]

This is so very true but so hard to find in today's society. I'm glad you feel this way and I hope other people get the message here. Good write.

[Damita Taylor]

This was cool ..so much said in so little words

[Octob3r Star]

Hell yes, ma'am ;)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Hooray!!!!!!!!! Yes!

[Tate Morgan]

beautiful very telling indeed

[AK]

Aeeosme poem! It is short but powerful nonetheless. The rhyming scheme is the cherry on the cake. Keep writing!