Ordinary Pleasures

Ordinary Pleasures

A Poem by Honeypot

 

When life is heavy and
Breathing seems hard
                                I wish you a day of
                Ordinary pleasures,
 
A cup of coffee that you didn’t have to make,
                                A windshield already scraped,
                Traffic that is nonexistent,
A day without complaints and
                                A kind word from a stranger.
 
                You deserve a lingering kiss on your lips,
Twinkling eyes and smile just for you,
                                Arms to wrap around you and
A night full of sighs and throaty giggles
                With secrets just for two.
 
When life kicks you the hardest,
                                I wish you a perfect day of
                Ordinary pleasures.

© 2009 Honeypot


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That was very beautiful and thoughtful. Just some of the wonders that we take for granted that make us happy and surround us all the time, if we are lucky. I especially liked "You deserve a lingering kiss on your lips,Twinkling eyes and smile just for you, Arms to wrap around you andA night full of sighs and throaty giggles With secrets just for two"

Very nice, my large hearted wifey!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Such beauty and kindness in your words. A simple wish we could all use. Thank you for sharing the beautiful poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Ordinary pleasures.......yes I agree......Should be labelled "ordinary luxuries". We appreciate them so much more as we get older and by expressing your feelings of suchlikes... you have proven this here. Thanks Honey.

Babs xxx

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was very beautiful and thoughtful. Just some of the wonders that we take for granted that make us happy and surround us all the time, if we are lucky. I especially liked "You deserve a lingering kiss on your lips,Twinkling eyes and smile just for you, Arms to wrap around you andA night full of sighs and throaty giggles With secrets just for two"

Very nice, my large hearted wifey!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is nothing more beautiful than the true face of daily life.
In the simplest of things we'd find joy amongst life's troubles.

You shared with us an uplifting poem of hope and sweet wishes.
Thank you Honey. :)

Punishment

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Simple yet so meaningful. We could all use this poem to cheer us up when things get too much. And they always do at some time or another don't they. Well written. Good.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such sweet and uplifting sentiments, it are those simple little things in life that can make your day and the love of those close to you.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Oh, this is just what wee all need to have some times. It makes me feel all war and cuddly like a stuffed animal. Come to think of it, that's what I am!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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this was wonderful. You know the best things in life are all those sweet little ordinary pleasures. This was a fantastic piece. Very nicely written and well expressed.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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