Invisible

 

Hidden in a corner,
Everything is dark.
I see the world arounf me,
But never taking part.

My friends just over look it,
I don't think they can see,
The thing inside me,
That is killing me.

It tears at my heart and soul,
Eating me alive.
Sometimes im just wishing,
That i just could die.

I want someone to notice,
See that i am there.
To hold me close and tell me,
That they really care.

Everyone's so wraped up in there life,
That all they really see is there own.

I want them to see that i am sitting here,
Confused and so alone.

I want someone to help me,
But no one seems to care.
Im wasting my life on ewishing,
That i was never here.

The pain inside is cutting me,
Like a thousand pieces of glass.
Driving deeper into my heart,
When i think about the past.

Im tired of looking in hte past,
But the future doesn't seem real.
So i will sit here,
Slowly trying to heal.
For i will always be,
Invisible  

Reviews

[Jane Doe]

i like it i litteraly cried during it some how but any way i really like it i mean the idea of some one actually coming up to me and holding me close like in the fairie tales but every ones a fake in the world but no one has ever cared about doubt any one ever will but at least people think i am happy with me little fake smile and in reality i am in the bathroom crying , dying oh how i like the idea of dying to get rid of all the pain no its not emo its its ...
reality

[.Kayla.Kronic.]

hehe this is my pome =)
yay i feel so happy !!! lol

-Kronic. XD

[Dimples87]

There may be a few spelling errors but overall, I loved this piece. You took us inside your world looking out. Your feelings really resignate with this poem and it screams to your reader and those you are speaking to.