My Life Inside A Graveyard.

My Life Inside A Graveyard.

A Poem by HorrorMaster
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Ever wonder how it feels like to live inside a graveyard.

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When I woke up it was dark,
my eyes were covered with bugs.
I couldn’t see everything.
I feel flies clawing into my skin,
my skin turns into a rotten corpse.
All my life were gone,
my heart stopped like a dead drum.
I need to get out of here.
I feel fear and frighten that I need to go somewhere.
I need food, human flesh food were I can eat all the blood and guts.
I can’t smell, I can’t see.
I feel my head bleeding down to my knee.
I feel dirt and wood.
I wish I would get out of here,
only if I could dig my way out of here.
I wont give up, never give up.
I most be strong to used my rotten fingers to break this wood where I am laying on.
I break, and I break this living piece of coffin.
I pull myself outside of this dirt.
As my life in a graveyard will never be forgotten.

© 2010 HorrorMaster


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Aside from the few minor grammatical mistakes, it makes a pretty interesting piece. The graphic imagery reminds me of the old horror movies I watched when I was young. Nice Poem.

Keep Writing. ^___^

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love it, and gives you a visual of what a dead person who becomes a zombie and wanting to get out of his grave feels!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I'm not a big poetry fan, however i liked this but i can't really offer any advice. Good though

Posted 8 Years Ago


Well done.

Regards,

Matthew

Posted 9 Years Ago


Not a good place to wake up is the graveyard. It mean you are dead or you had a very bad day. A short poem with a very good story.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


I liked it. It kind of tells how a zombie is scared when it's first awaken in it's coffin and frantically tries to claw it's way up to eat... Give them more of a personality rather than just a walking corpse.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow, very interesting writing you have here. This was a nice read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


cool....

Posted 9 Years Ago


oh my god, am scared.... i'm usually scared or feel kind of uneasy when talks like ghosts or graveyards are concerned.. anyways your poem was good... good enough to get out the right feel

Posted 9 Years Ago


Really creepy. Your description was great. I loved the idea, and overall, it was terrific. I liked it, and thought it was a great read.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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