Fear

Fear

A Poem by HorrorMaster
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Warning: This poem is super scary. It's about a ghost in a hospital

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As I stand alone in this hospital,
I look at myself in a mirror nothing but skin and bones.
I remember being so old,
I feel so cold and lonely.
Why am I here?
I walk in the dark hallway calling for nurses.
“Help! Help!”
Nurses fear me as they can’t see me,
They hear me calling, “Help! Help!” again.
I went near them as they pass me.
What is wrong with me?
Why do I fear them?
Am I dead?
I remember my head bleeding,
As I lay down in my bed.
What happen to me?
Why every time I see them, they can’t see me?
I see demons coming for me,
Some of them want to drag me in hell for all eternity.
I hide in this man room in the hospital,
I see him laying on his side.
I started to fade away,
Before more people will fear me in this day.



© 2010 HorrorMaster


Author's Note

HorrorMaster
This poem also give me the chills when I wrote it. How about you?

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Its good, and keeps you wondering why, how, and whether they will succeed in dragging him to hell.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like it, keeps you on edge.

Posted 10 Years Ago


that was a good poeem

Posted 10 Years Ago


creepy... a poem that could definately make you afraid of death if you weren't already.

Posted 10 Years Ago


nice though its not reely scarry to me more creepy then annything but im not reely scare of ghosts anyway more so facinated then annything

Posted 10 Years Ago


Good one :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


U will give me a heart attack!!!! chilling fear.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The pic is creeeeeeeppppyyy... whoaa

Anyways, your poem was quite vivid and a great read. Nice write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I certainly thought this poem was creepy, and I absolutely loved it. This reminds me of a "Tales from the Crypt" story. I think that this is creepy because we're all going to have to go through this someday in our lives; isolation, fear of death, aging, and fear of seeing your dead-self... It's scary, but very real... Besides that, this is a great poem to freak anyone out on any stormy night!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Certainly does sweet! There is an essence of ODE to this! I like how it can be interpreted two ways, one of which is the OBE and the person observing himself rising from a dying body, or a person realising they are failing, great piece friend! xx

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on March 24, 2010
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HorrorMaster

Tamarac, FL



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Hello i'm Ira and i'm pretty much a horror writer. I have bad grammar and spelling or typos errors, but I tried my best, so please enjoy them. Also I don't like harsh grammar nazi saying (oh yo.. more..

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