Ugly

A poem about suicide

 I stand on the beach sand looking at the brightening sun.
People look at me like I’m an ugly beast.
It seem like everyday they stared at me all frightened.
They see my eyes all red,
Sometimes they wish I was dead.
Why are they scared of me?
They circle around  in front of me, as I stared at the sky.
They see my tears as I start to cry.
In their thoughts they are calling me ugly.
I give them their wish for me to die,
 I pull out my gun and shoot my head while I cry.

Author's Note

Sorry I'm just very depressed, but don't worry I wont kill myself. I have my whole life a head.

Listen to this sad music while you read the poem. :(

Reviews

[Shalini Dinesh (Poet's ..]

there are happy times that we cherish yet we need to handle sad days cause only then will we know the value of happiness and even if we had forgotten God on other days, when we are sad we will turn to him, it gives us courage and confidence once we have successfully handled it.. lovely touching poem...
Keep smiling

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Sad story here. There is a ghost that haunts the words.
i feel like a witness.

[WriderParker]

very good man, I know how depression feels man I went though it too. If you need a talk i'm here to message

[Eric Cox]

This is a very well written poem with an extremely sad feel to it. Depression enters many peoples lives, hope it leaves you soon.

[Star Wolf]

Harsh, but feeling that awful can't be anything else but harsh.

[Tina Kline]

Wanting to suicide is a very awful and painful feeling. When you're that depressed and hurting everything seems negative. Good job on writing about this.

[Holly-Marie]

Very sad. It was really well written and flowed well but it was the raw emotion and the power behind this piece that really made it speacial for me.

[Sean M. Addams]

very well expressed very deep and emotional piece but i thought you did great on this...

[shoelace]

that gave me the chills for some reason. i guess its hard to imagine something so sad. but the poem is truly heart-touching. it makes me want to reach out for this person and give them a big hug and all the happiness in the world. thanks for sharing.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i feel the same way, depressed