Ugly

A poem about suicide

 I stand on the beach sand looking at the brightening sun.
People look at me like I’m an ugly beast.
It seem like everyday they stared at me all frightened.
They see my eyes all red,
Sometimes they wish I was dead.
Why are they scared of me?
They circle around  in front of me, as I stared at the sky.
They see my tears as I start to cry.
In their thoughts they are calling me ugly.
I give them their wish for me to die,
 I pull out my gun and shoot my head while I cry.

Author's Note

Sorry I'm just very depressed, but don't worry I wont kill myself. I have my whole life a head.

Listen to this sad music while you read the poem. :(

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

This is such a deeply moving write... gripping the heart and mind... I was there... I know those feelings... the desperation... Brilliantly spoken, my friend. Yes.. you have so much living yet to do.

[QuietPoet]

Your not ugly! Dont let people you down. Thats terrible. People never notice that they hurt people. I'm sorry you feel this way. I hope you feel better. People here accept you. Im always here if you need someone to talk to. Great poem and deep.

[Ice QueenJen]

Oh what a beautiful, yet sad poem- some people can be so cruel to another human being. And yes, each day you write is another day of life and if you take your life how will people enjoy the wonders that come out of your mind. I love your writing, even the bizarre ones!

[George Love]

Very depressing and I am glad you fixed some of your grammatical errors. They do detract from an artists work, so don't forget that we are here to help. Clear picture of the true ugliness of depression.

[Bette]

wow your not kidding about being depressed, emotional poem you have here.

[Hippy]

no problem man just glad to help you showed a great display of emotion here man i just wanted to clean it up and make you art shine the way it should

[HorrorMaster]

Oh okay thanks for the help. I fix it man.

[Hippy]

its good very sad and shows it but there were so many mistakes in it
I stand on the beach looking at the brighten sun.
i think brighten should be brightening it just doesnt seem to fit the way you have it
People look at me like I’m a ugly beast.
it should be an instead of a ugly
It seem like everyday they stared at me all frighten.
I feel it should be frightened
Why they’re scared of me?
should be why are they not why they are
but if you fixed these minor mistakes i feel it would really make this art work shine its very sad but has powerful emotion good job there

[deeps]

This is quite the lonely write here.
But I also think it is quite powerful as well.
Very well written and feelings very well expressed.

[Poetic Beauty]

Wow this is very sad and it makes my heart bleed at the thoughts. I hope you are feeling better now.