I was stupid

I was stupid

A Poem by HorrorMaster
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A poem about being drunk and the next day you start having a hangover

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I was stupid for going out drinking,

I wasn’t thinking right.

I wanted to have fun.

I throw up at my friends house.

Now with this hangover,

I feel like a dumbass.

I look in my wallet,

I realized my money gone missing,

I think they took my money, as I don’t remember.

I am crying with tears in my eyes,

My heart slowly dying.

I’m really sorry for everything,

I will never drink again.

 

© 2010 HorrorMaster


Author's Note

HorrorMaster
ignore grammar problems please
Yes I was out drinking last night and I felt so bad right now.

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Wow. This was great. So blunt, I love it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Effects always remain after the drkink. Good right.

Posted 10 Years Ago


:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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You give us a powerful glimpse through your own experience of what drinking can do. Excellent, vivid imagery and emotion.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like this, Well written

Posted 10 Years Ago


I know this story. Many a bad mornings wishing to had used common sense. The description and story was real and true. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


The dreaded sickness and hang over. I think you've captured what this is so all like! Great job and hope you don't have to experience this too often, it really is no fun.

Posted 10 Years Ago


um.. maybe next time drink with people you know and care about you?
that way even if you are drunk nothing really is going to happen..
well, i hope you feel better from your hangover.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Know what you're talking about in this poem. But it seems we always do it again!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked it. I don't think you should have drank then. Well thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on May 8, 2010
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Tags: depressed, poem, drinking, Hangover

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HorrorMaster
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Tamarac, FL



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Hello i'm Ira and i'm pretty much a horror writer. I have bad grammar and spelling or typos errors, but I tried my best, so please enjoy them. Also I don't like harsh grammar nazi saying (oh yo.. more..

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