My Evil Eyes

My Evil Eyes

A Poem by HorrorMaster
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A song lyric I wrote about people scared to meet me. It gets heavy at the end.

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When I meet you, all you do is run away

Why you afraid of me?

Why you scared of me? 

When you look into my evil eyes


What do I ever do to you?


Now you see in my evil eyes

Now you see in my evil eyes

Now you see in my evil eyes

It destroyed everything in my life


All I want is to be your friend

But you run away from me

Why you hate me?

What did I do to you?

Are you scared of my evil eyes?

 

Now you see in my evil eyes

Now you see in my evil eyes

Now you see in my evil eyes

Now you see in my evil eyes

It destroyed everything in my life

 

Heavy solo

 

Why you think I’m a stalker?

I won’t do anything to hurt you

Why you scared of me?

When you look into my evil eyes

 

 

Now you see in my evil eyes

Now you see in my evil eyes

Now you see in my evil eyes

Now you see in my evil eyes

Now you see in my evil eyes

It destroyed everything in my life

 

Heavy solo

 

Death metal vocals repeat


Now you see in my evil eyes

Now you see in my evil eyes

Now you see in my evil eyes

Now you see in my evil eyes

© 2010 HorrorMaster


Author's Note

HorrorMaster
You can listen to me singing it in my band page. http://www.myspace.com/everybodydiesband

I know we need to practice more to that song. My singing is a little weak in it, but I tried.

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If this is about being judged why do you refer to yourself as having evil eyes? It sounds like you're down on yourself, or judging yourself as evil before anyone else can. Using the word evil referring to yourself throws the reader off a bit. I do like this a lot ( don't get me wrong here), and reading your explanation below does help to see it the way you meant it to be.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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this describes exactly how I feel about Mike edwards at school

Posted 9 Years Ago


This song was fun to record. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Cool poem. I like the picture it paints in your head. The word choice makes it very vivid and it stands out. I enjoyed the lyrics. So, then I listened to the song. Your singing is somewhat touchy, and I agree that you guys need more practice. I agree with Justin Street below on this. It does seem like you may be trying too hard. But, all you can do is keep trying. Good luck, and I hope it turns out awesome!

Posted 10 Years Ago


it was really hard to read while i was listening to the Hives, so i turned them off and found that this was really well written (I think you should get a Pure volume so i can listen to you)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Pretty good, i listened to you doing it also, not bad, but your right your singing is a little touchy. I'm 90% sure though that the reason is that your trying to hard. The instrumentals are great, the song is great, but it seems like you're straining to hit the notes. Start out talking, then repeat the song getting louder and more metallic with every round.-Justin

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like the fact that you're asking them why their afraid yet you take their fear and pin it on yourself "Now you see in my evil eyes" Nice work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I will listen to it, but I like the words and it could be your own guilt in doing something that makes you feel like evil eyes are watching you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The imagery in this song is very well done. Great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Those damn evil eyes will keep you free of the innocence one's. A very good poem. I like the flow and the repetition. The poem was powerful. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


To judge oneself is sometimes over judged. Now this sounded like some of the songs my grandson listens to.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on May 11, 2010
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HorrorMaster
HorrorMaster

Tamarac, FL



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