Blood

Blood

A Poem by HorrorMaster
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My first haiku poem

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Blood covered your body.

Death steals your soul.

Now you pass away.

© 2010 HorrorMaster


Author's Note

HorrorMaster
I think I did it right lol, it's my first.

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You said it all in three lines. That takes great talent. When death come for you. No way back. A excellent haiku.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Just like a brilliant crimson scream!!! Hey, nice job on this!

Posted 13 Years Ago


great work man. short, but sends chills down the reader's back. i found this really nice. awesome

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow. I loved it. Great job. *Sniffs* I smell blood now =P

Posted 13 Years Ago


Cool horror haiku. Paints a dark picture.

Posted 13 Years Ago


That's rather dramatic, just like coming across a very obvious splash of blood! I do like it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow! That's like a fist in the face type of poem. Blunt and to the point. It does make quite the crimson splash. However, a haiku is 5-7-5 syllables. I don't think you'd have any problem rewriting this to fit that rule at all!

Posted 13 Years Ago


whoa. (:
kewl...kinda haiku...
yay for haikus!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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i never was one for haikus haha but it was good i think u did it rite too honestly it was a good haiku

Posted 13 Years Ago


I actually really like the poem. I think its very excellent imagery and feel. However, to make it a haiku it should be 5 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 5 in the last. You have 6-4-5. Almost got it though.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on July 7, 2010
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Tamarac, FL



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Hello i'm Ira and i'm pretty much a horror writer. I have bad grammar and spelling or typos errors, but I tried my best, so please enjoy them. Also I don't like harsh grammar nazi saying (oh yo.. more..

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