War of Freedom

A poem about our war we are having now against the terrorist. They need to be stop.

Every day I always heard on what is going on with our world today.

It makes me sick of seeing terrorist destroying our army troops in Iraq.

Why can they just stop with this madness?

I say that all of us should stop with this war.

It’s making everyone sad by hearing their armies dying in Iraq.

Every day I heard them crying,

Let there be freedom in our world.

All of us should be in peace.

We shall all get together and stop this war.

We shall all pray for our troops fighting for our country.

We shall all fight for them for our freedom.

Come together and let’s hold hands as we match to stop this war.

By the time in our future some of us won’t be alive to see our love ones coming back after this war.

On this day we will be in peace for our war of freedom.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Senseless whatever]

Good write. Your emotion comes through with this one. If only life were so simple.

[Tina Kline]

Great poem, very positive and I think our troops should come home also, and to a hero's welcome as well!!!!

[Star Wolf]

I just want this whole war to end now. I like the thoughts and feelings in your poem. I think you said it all very nicely.

[Black Cat Fever]

I agree with you 100%, with everything you say here and the emotions as well.

[Nicaushio Yamaki]

i like it

[Loner]

Nicely written very impressive.

[Ruth]

AMEN!
All I can say is if we keep taking innocent lives then it shall be returned three fold!
War is never needed, and isn't it strange that is mainly for oil and ancient knowledge - oh, not to mention the fact the amount of Opium production has rapidly increased since the invasion into Afghanistan! Hmm, a red herring swims beside the bold title of war!
xx

[Shelby Baker]

This is hitting home. I have a few friends in the military and then my boy is being sent over in oct for his third tour. I agree it needs to stop. Another powerful write by you.
This isn't much of a review i know but great poem! Totally smooth and alot of people can relate!

Rating: 100