I'm Sorry

A poem about a friend made another friend sad and asking her forgiveness.

I’m sorry I made you sad

I didn’t mean to make you mad at me

I hope you forgive me, so we can be friends

It will make me glad to see you smile.

I wish I can take back from what I said.

I would give you gifts.

If you could give me one more chance,

I will make you happy even more.

Please forgive me!

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Frifthor (D^2)]

I have to say you've done well in expanding yourself out of the horror genre, leading into an awful lot of good poetry. I like that you've kept up incorporating songs into your stories and poem (especially since it's a nice remix), as it adds it's own atmosphere to the writing. Good work once again, I look forward to seeing what comes up next.

[Matthew Kult]

I agree with Bice. Good.

[Daniel Gardner]

I agree with Nicaushio "bice work" lol. I can feel the emotional dispair of the poem. It is a moving piece of frienships lost.

[Nicaushio Yamaki]

bice work

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a heart felt apology. Nice way to say I'm sorry

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem has a childlike innocence that charms.
It feels sincere. sweet work.