Come back

Come back

A Poem by HorrorMaster
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A poem about having your only best friend coming back to chill with you.

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Please come back, so we can chill.

Since you been gone it made me ill.

You are my true friend.

Please come back!

I’m sorry that you feel sad.

If you chill with me, I will make you feel glad.

I know how you feel on being heart broken.

You just got to move on.

We all miss you dude.

Your true friends and your mom miss you.

I’m not gay, but I have to say I miss you man.

Please come back, so we can hang again.

© 2010 HorrorMaster


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Just heard he is coming back on thursday. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Exceptional piece... i feel your pain... when all you want to do is chill with your friend they're depressed and secluded, not wanting to hang out. Not wanting to talk. Heart felt. Considerate. Great structure.

Posted 10 Years Ago


straight from the heart, nice writting

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very hear felt, I hope this dude came back.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very cool poem. Love the message of wanting a friend to return and ease sadness. Nicely penned.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very sad poem, and the sadness comes through strongly in the pleading that is going on for your friend to please return and hang out again.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This shows you really care about your friend. Very touching and I hope this person comes back to hang with you again.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very nice work

Posted 10 Years Ago


this very sweet i know who this is about and i think this very much a show of ture friendship and devotion...

Posted 10 Years Ago


tell ur friend to suck it up and not be so sad and to hang with his friends
good little poem

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on October 10, 2010
Last Updated on October 10, 2010
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HorrorMaster
HorrorMaster

Tamarac, FL



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Hello i'm Ira and i'm pretty much a horror writer. I have bad grammar and spelling or typos errors, but I tried my best, so please enjoy them. Also I don't like harsh grammar nazi saying (oh yo.. more..

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