A Ghost Dance

A Ghost Dance

A Poem by HorrorMaster
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A poem about a man saw his ghost girlfriend dancing ballet in a graveyard.

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I stand in a graveyard looking at my girlfriend gravestone,

I send my flowers of red roses on her stone.

She used to be a beautiful ballerina dancer,

She died by a heart attack.

In my dreams I see her dancing in next to me.

I miss her smiled as she stared at me.

I close my eyes crying over her grave.

I open my eyes as I see the sky turning darkness

I see smokes of fog passing by her gravestone.

I see her dancing like she a ghost through the fog.

I called for her but she can’t hear me.

She kept on dancing as she came near me.

My eyes were in tears of joy when I saw her.

I told her to don’t leave me.

As soon she was done dancing,

The fog disappears and she was gone.

I will never forget her  dance.

© 2011 HorrorMaster


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Both chilling and sad, a touch bittersweet. I really like this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Quite heartbreaking. You did an amazing job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ira, your imagination is awesome.you have such good ideas! i did like this.very much.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A ghostly sad poem. I could see all this playing out as I read your words.

Posted 10 Years Ago


My Goodness this was so sad as well as dark. I liked it though.
It's very awesome!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Beautiful, sad, dark and just out right really good! The song definitely went perfect with it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


eery but gorgeous poem! the song went perfectly with it, nice work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Beautiful and touching poem in short a heartfelt piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The content of the poem is good but you have over used the words gravestone, stone and grave. It makes for a distraction in my opinion in a short poem. The imagery is amazing and I can picture a man with his head laid on a gravestone at night with the clouds passing over head. It is a somber scene and you have clearly pour the emotion into this. the flow of this poem is a bit off here and there in some place.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Excellent!
The visions that spirit grant us! lol
Another cool poem love, you have a talent for darkness
xx

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on January 9, 2011
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HorrorMaster
HorrorMaster

Tamarac, FL



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Hello i'm Ira and i'm pretty much a horror writer. I have bad grammar and spelling or typos errors, but I tried my best, so please enjoy them. Also I don't like harsh grammar nazi saying (oh yo.. more..

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