A Poem by HorrorMaster

A poem about me suffering dealing with a broken jaw and wired shut mouth.


I hate dealing with this with a broken jaw.

I saw those doctors putting wires in my mouth.

Now I can’t eat and talk.

I’ve been dealing with this while walking for a past 4 weeks.

It won’t get out of my head for what I’ve done to deserved this.

Sometimes I wish I was dead, so it will end.

My pain and suffering won’t never end.

Whenever I sleep I feel unconforable.

Please make it stop.

This x ray is for my broken jaw. 

© 2011 HorrorMaster

Author's Note

Got punch in the face at this party on May 21 at this house party. I got drunk and did something stupid and now I am suffering from this and got to wait for 2 more weeks to get the wires out of mouth.

ignore grammar problems please

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Reviews such a small word for so big a hurt...

wish you well...


Posted 9 Years Ago

A very chilling experience. I can't even imagine the pain that comes with this procedure and enduring it while you recover. Nice job.

Posted 9 Years Ago

This sounds like a real nightmare! Cool that you wrote about it.

Posted 9 Years Ago

I hope you feel better soon!

Posted 9 Years Ago

A very painful experience. I wish you a speedy and full recovery.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What an awful, and horrible experience! But always remember, the greatest suffering and the greatest pain only leads you to becoming a better person, and a inspire you to push your writing to all new levels. Never sit and complain when a story that could change lives could be written! Hope it gets better soon!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Sorry to hear about our experience. We all learn from our mistakes.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Sounds like an awful experience. This is a good expressive poem. lol and good wishes.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OMFG I'm sooo sorry Ira...I wish I could make you feel better....and I know it's stressful on you. I love you.

Posted 9 Years Ago

You will lose weight. To be blocked from good food would do me in. I like the desire to escape the wires in your mouth. A very interesting poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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11 Reviews
Added on June 16, 2011
Last Updated on June 16, 2011



Tamarac, FL

Hello i'm Ira and i'm pretty much a horror writer. I have bad grammar and spelling or typos errors, but I tried my best, so please enjoy them. Also I don't like harsh grammar nazi saying (oh yo.. more..


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