Acapella Harmony

Acapella Harmony

A Poem by Hoshi Nami
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written 1-20-2010 shouldn't have let you go.

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My feathers can’t handle the burden of blame
the fault is my own for covering my eyes with excuses
Pride
was instead
simple Jealousy
You would sings songs about us laughing
until the windows got misty
and I would sleep in the comfort of the Harmony we shared
but that wasn’t enough
and you searched for passion
cutting through the screens of self disillusionment
and found her there waiting.

© 2010 Hoshi Nami


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Wow... this is beautiful...

"and I would sleep in the comfort of the Harmony we shared"

its just beautiful.. I dont even know what to say... i loved how you narrated this. You have it all, the rhymes, the flow, the meaning, feeling... just perfect.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow... this is beautiful...

"and I would sleep in the comfort of the Harmony we shared"

its just beautiful.. I dont even know what to say... i loved how you narrated this. You have it all, the rhymes, the flow, the meaning, feeling... just perfect.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Hoshi Nami
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my favorite poets (in order) are:: charles baudelaire william butler yeats carl sandburg pablo neruda i love the spanish language. my favorite color is purple. i've been down the rabbit hole, and am .. more..

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