A Blue Rose

A Blue Rose

A Poem by House of Immite

Desiring the unattainable

The blue rose makes a scene
Shyly seducing my attention
Exploring existence amongst the green
Simple natural selection

A red rose's cheeks darken
Emotions stir inside my stem
Desire to touch the meadow's alien
An act likely the green to condemn

The scent of blossom stimulates
Plucks my sanity, petal by petal
Loves me - Loves me not castrates
Dismantled, on the ground I settle

Roots cease to demonstrate prudence
To pollinate I am powered
Degenerates the bloom of innocence
As the blue rose sustains deflowered

© 2013 House of Immite

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Added on July 31, 2013
Last Updated on August 1, 2013
Tags: rose, flower, blue, red, love, rape, desire, sex, emotion, affection, sanity, virginity, virgin, impossible, nonexistent


House of Immite
House of Immite

Amman, Jordan

The past formulates who we are today. This is the loose basis of my poetry. I'm 19 years old and I study architecture. I speak Arabic and English fluently, now learning German and hopefully after t.. more..