Beth

Beth

A Poem by Relic
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An old one.

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Twas me, that noted Beth's good looks -
Her ample breast and thighs.
With each gaze she produced from me
She held me mesmerized.

Her silky skin bewildered me
As did each candid phrase.
But oh, how sweet the day became
When held in Beth's sweet gaze.

Were I to find another girl
I doubt she could compare
nor correspond the way Beth does
with such a lovely flair.

© 2019 Relic


Author's Note

 Relic
Thanks, Richard and emipoemi.

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Such a vivid memory recalled, and perhaps sweeter than the past, at least for some. As I've aged, I've come to treasure those memories, even more than the past moments. Sometimes our minds fill in the vacant places with good things, and I'll take that at my age. Truly enjoyed this one, Relic.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


 Relic

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks so much R.E.
such a wonderful, cute write here. nicely written

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


 Relic

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks very much, Amy. :)
Kesch

2 Weeks Ago

not a problem.....
love is hard to get over, especially, when you are constantly comparing future partners with the past. i would be lying if i said it was easy but it certainly is possible to find love again.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


 Relic

3 Weeks Ago

I'm sure it is Ms. I do remember that heavy feeling in my ribs and hearing the song by Chicago calle.. read more
ms. understood

3 Weeks Ago

the worst part about break ups is the physical pain that you feel. hope everything is well now!!
 Relic

3 Weeks Ago

Yeah, fine now. She wound up moving away and I haven't heard from her since. I think she left me in .. read more
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love the rhyme scheme and flow, so nicely written.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


 Relic

3 Weeks Ago

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Gee
Hmmmm, methinks you have written flair but meant pair.
Such an easy read, flowed effortlessly from this old tongue of mine.

Posted 11 Months Ago


 Relic

11 Months Ago

hahahaha, no, although I see your point. Thanks, Gee. :)
This poem has it all -- rhyme, rhythm, originality, & nuance of feelings floating thru each line. I love the way your expressions are dynamic, showing interactions in creative ways (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 12 Months Ago


 Relic

12 Months Ago

I appreciate your review, Margie. Thanks. :)
That was cute and sensitive! You reminded us how we all have a Beth in our lives! Well done 😉

Posted 12 Months Ago


 Relic

12 Months Ago

Thanks so much, Svivid.
A delicate write, Relic....

Simply worded and constructed but with wonderful flow, rhyme and rhythm. Girls like Beth are special indeed. Absolute wonders for the eyes to behold.

A very romantic piece of writing. Well Done.

Posted 12 Months Ago


 Relic

12 Months Ago

Thanks so much, Doodley. :)
There's a mystical aura about this piece that's simply captivating. And the picture adds substantially to it. I think, grammatically, the first word should be "'Twas". Other than that, well done!

Posted 12 Months Ago


 Relic

12 Months Ago

Thank you, emipoemi.
emipoemi

12 Months Ago

my pleasure.
This is simply beautiful - so much can be revealed through ones eyes. :)

Posted 12 Months Ago


 Relic

12 Months Ago

Thank you Carolynn. I agree. :)

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