my broken heart

my broken heart

A Poem by Heather

I've got 
Once again,
A BROKEN HEART
how will I ever cope?
I have never loved anyone like I did with him
This guy made me worth it and felt special
He helped me with my self-esteem
He is trustworthy
This is the most hurtful feeling 
I have experienced
In my love life
I fell for you
I am still falling
But I know there is nobody there to catch me

© 2012 Heather


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Such a truthful, well written write.


Posted 4 Years Ago


Very good and true poem, I especially like the last line 'there is nobody there to catch me' very good poem, thanks for sharing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Such an amazing and true poem.
Well done :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very good poem. easy to sympathize with a true worthy idea for a poem. I found the mood in the words itself a little dull though. Nevertheless, A poem of true emontion is atrractive through its meaning of motion.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I wrote two poems recently after a break up, I found writing helped. Reading your poem your pain and hurt is very apparent and I can empathise and what is nice is that you still speak highly of him which shows how much you cared for him.

I hope you find happier themes to write about soon, good work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


There is nothing like losing a love, nothing. It feels like it can't possibly be right, can't possibly be happening. Like there is no way you could build with someone else what you had. Water the grass, don't find greener... Sad. Good job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Heather

8 Years Ago

thanks :)
The flow is good and you have described your emotions very nicely .. kindly keep up the good work
take care
Qasim

Posted 8 Years Ago


Heather

8 Years Ago

Thanks
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Mia
This is sad :( I'm sorry. Love is a crazy thing, when you're in it...when you lose it...it hurts and we're just trying to figure it out. This is a great expression of your emotions and while I'm sorry for your hurt, I'm not sorry for what come of it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Heather

8 Years Ago

Thanks
Mia

8 Years Ago

My pleasure!
Muhammad Qasim

8 Years Ago

My pleasure
Veyr emotional. :/

Posted 8 Years Ago


I liked the breakdown of this piece and how it flowed... kind of staccato to me and I liked that. You expressed emotion well and I could sense you loss and heartbreak as I reading. Well done!

~Erinne

Posted 8 Years Ago


Heather

8 Years Ago

thanks

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