my broken heart

I've got 

Once again,

A BROKEN HEART

how will I ever cope?

I have never loved anyone like I did with him

This guy made me worth it and felt special

He helped me with my self-esteem

He is trustworthy

This is the most hurtful feeling 

I have experienced

In my love life

I fell for you

I am still falling

But I know there is nobody there to catch me

Reviews

[Erinne S.]

I liked the breakdown of this piece and how it flowed... kind of staccato to me and I liked that. You expressed emotion well and I could sense you loss and heartbreak as I reading. Well done!

~Erinne

[Heather]

thanks

[Sami Khalil]

In my love life
I fell for you.
A nice write.

[Heather]

thanks

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[rnuff]

so sad but well expressed

[Heather]

thanks

[Sheila Kline]

You have just reviewed one of my "lost love" pieces so I can see now why you were able to relate to it!! You also are capable of describing your feelings in a way that allows me to really feel it! It is the horror of the fall that hurts us the most!
We are able to heal when we are able to bounce with the fall!!

[Heather]

thanks

[Craba]

so sorry, well expressed tho' strong emotion

[Heather]

thanks

[Heather]

please comment and rate (: