according to you

according to you

A Poem by Heather

According to you
I am not the best girl to be dating
I am NOT  like those other girls where they do EVERYTHING!
Ain't it fumy though
There ain't no other man 
Like you in the world?
That just is terrible
After tonight 
I hope you realized you lost someone who loved you for you not for anything else
And it didn't take me long to know I am way better off without you
Months later
"I am all alone. Please tell me you will always be my baby?" You say
You silly boy!
You have never left my mind
I am in no rush what so ever though, to be your girlfriend once again
Habibi, keep holding on to what our friendship is
WE, of course will spend every moment together as friends until you come to your sense that I am happy loving you for you and not who your are trying to be to prove to everyone that you are "cool"
We will live every moment like we are forever young
Hush hush now
The time isn't the right time
Your fear of having me is all in your head
You need to feel it in your heart
You and I will both know when our time to love is right
Set our previous love on fire
Let us start over

© 2012 Heather

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Wow! This is great writing! This was real, it was honest, it was authentic, we could feel your emotions. I love the attitude in it. I love the message in it. You are right on, both in this write and in your brain and heart. I would be proud to tell the world your were my daughter... show this one to your Mom... you will win points big time.

I just love the ending:

Set our previous love on fire
Let us start over

You go girl!

Posted 8 Years Ago

The title reminds of that country song... or pop song? whichever.....

Ain't it fumy though (funny?)

Posted 8 Years Ago

please comment and rate (:

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