Mind, Heart and Soul

Mind, Heart and Soul

A Poem by Heather

Has anyone noticed how hard it is to let go
I have always had this problem
I dream impossible dreams
Try destroying my mind
You'll see how complicated it is
Try making my heart throb for you
You'll never see what I really think about you
Try ripping out my soul
And see how you will regret it

© 2012 Heather

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ye. i had problems when talking about letting go. it really is hard to let go.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I always enjoy your straightforward emotional poems, this poem makes my heart break a little. Great Poem

Posted 8 Years Ago

this is honest, direct and pendulous in nature...like an approaching storm. i think you have nailed the personal aspects of this issue well. i agree with Nicholas....it would resonate with some repetition!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Like the penultimate line a lot - strong !

Posted 8 Years Ago

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really cool Try, Try, Try repetition, there is more here than is seen at first glance.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on November 7, 2012
Last Updated on November 7, 2012




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