Soiled Blood
A Book by Lydia Rosewood
 A rebellion strikes the kingdom of Evermosa, the Pureblood humans against Mixed Blood. Many Families stricken by the grief, Kiscara, a half-elf abandoned in her adolescence. Full Summary inside.  © 2011 Lydia Rosewood
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I'm still in high School so contructive critism is welcome but please no Flame Reviews.
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I like the premise of your story. You have good description although too much of it can lose a reader's attention. All your description being good makes it hard to decide which to cut, but it's important not to allow description to slow the story. Good writing keep it up.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Ditto. I like the way you write.
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Posted 12 Years Ago
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The chapter was great!
Posted 12 Years Ago
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