Give Me A Bisquit

Give Me A Bisquit

A Poem by Hurdy
"

Fun, right, it's just for fun, right.

"
Ew.

What an awful, disgusting feeling.
I am a delicate, soft ceramic cup
only a quarter way full
and three quarters the way
unfulfilled;

it is easy to expect a lot from other cups
but many of them do not like to share their tea.
There is a pretty rose tea pot,
who speaks like a porcelain, romantic Victorian,
that, apparently, does not like to share it's haughty chai.

I have made a sacrifice,
I have poured out my own into the cups of the enemy,
so that I could sport the juice of my lovely
but here I sit, by the stove, hot and shattering
Feeling green, but not relaxed.
Only a quarter way full,
and three quarters the way
Unfulfilled.

© 2013 Hurdy


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I loved it. :)
It's cute. And it seems to me more cuter because i imagined these feelings of jealousy and sadness in cups only. just like in cartoons where non living things got eyes and smileys. In that way i felt and enjoyed it.
What a pretty and cute cup.
I wish he will get his dream chai soon to make him completely filled. :D


Posted 6 Years Ago


Hurdy

6 Years Ago

Thank you. :)

Yes, having those feelings embodied in cups was sort of cathartic. It ma.. read more
writer in trial

6 Years Ago

:D :D
This way of imagining things is actually a right way to lessen the pain and brings smile.. read more
I have poured out my own into the cups of the enemy. Beautifully written and brought a huge smile to my face thanks! =D

Posted 6 Years Ago


Hurdy

6 Years Ago

Haha seriously!

Thanks. I think it is a lot lighter than my other stuff. When I felt t.. read more
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L.u.c.a.s.

6 Years Ago

And that is why we write woohooo!!!!!! =D

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Hurdy
Hurdy

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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