The Darkness Is Warm

The Darkness Is Warm

A Poem by xXxCynicalWarsxXx

Love too eats me away

Love to me is the darkness

Lovely

Wondrous

Inviting...

You of all men I loved and miss

You of all mortal beings I wanted to kiss...

Now the darkness is cold without you.

© 2011 xXxCynicalWarsxXx


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This is amazing!! I know, third review in one day...seriously, though, this is good! Strangely, I get it, a lot better than a lot of poems actually. It's just kind of primal I guess....or maybe that's not the word....anyway, this is great, excellent job :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very sad and indeed strange, but I like it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


It's very strange but its good well done:D

Posted 8 Years Ago


Interesting visuals in such a short writing. I did stumble a bit on the first line, unable to make sense of whether it should read "Love to eat me away", "Love to me eats away" or "Love eats me away" ... Perhaps a slight revision could go there?

Posted 8 Years Ago



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I am only the girl you see. My mind is caves and roads of red. My heart is generous and yes, Who am I without scars? I have my secrets. I have my songs I play and sing. Mostly, I have just my in.. more..

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