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I want to fix this mess....

I want to fix this mess....

A Poem by xXxCynicalWarsxXx

Reality of today...

It feels like you're mad at me, though I don't know for sure...
Inside, i'm dying to make amends...
Inside, i'm crying and pleading and begging for myself to stop over reacting...
Outside, i am mute...
Outside, the tears are not found...
I want to handle this maturely,
And I want to make amends.
I want to be able to say, "It was my fault for everything!  You have all the right to have gotten mad at me!"
But I want to be able to say this:
I am sorry.
You must kow that I need to fix this mess...
Though to you it just may be a problem
I hate to say, it's a mess in my mind...
Please, whatever you do:
Forgive me.

© 2011 xXxCynicalWarsxXx

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This powerful plea is very touching, and something i think everyone can relate with. There is always someone whom we have offended and we just want to make amends, but we done always know if they will listen. Very passionate.

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Added on September 23, 2011
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