A Waste Of A Crush

A Waste Of A Crush

A Poem by life in a ne/on tube
"

True story for me.

"

We laughed and talked

We had it made

Then I saw you with her

And everything changed

Guess my hopeful crush

Was just a worthless waste

And you and me

Weren't meant to be

© 2010 life in a ne/on tube


Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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awww so sweat!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice work! I think that a lot of people who read this will be able to relate to this. I liked the fact that you took something that was so clearly personal to you and wrote it in such a universal way, because as the reader, I felt like I could connect to the emotional side of the theme. I felt that the rhyming was a little bit awkward towards the end, and didn't flow as well as the first half of the poem, but overall, I thought that this was a short and sweet write. :)
~PaperHearts

Posted 13 Years Ago


actually you never know..anyways great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I've had this happen before. It sucks!

Great job(: Its very truthful.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 24, 2010
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