Our Hands

Based on a dream I had about my crush <3

Puzzle piece hands fit together

Like yours and mine, intertwined

Revealing youthful love

While

Cogwheel hands interlock

Like yours and mine, combined

Two halves becoming whole

A magnetic pull for comforting hold

A longing to fill space between fingers

Yours and mine

Belong

Reviews

[Graceful]

awww. so cute. ( gee i wonder who this is about! hahaha jk ) love the poem. Bravo! so sweat!

[Samantha]

I like this alot. It was simple and sweet. I like how you compared holding hands to puzzle pieces and that it rhymed. I like it very much. Thanks for sharing

[PaperHearts]

I liked this a lot. It was so simple, yet carried such strong and evocative emotions. I really liked your wording in this piece, in particular the part about the interlocking cogwheel hands. I thought that you did a great job in capturing the nature of young love, and wrote it in such a sweet, heartfelt, and relatable way. Nice work,
~PaperHearts

[Short.Nerd]

Aw so sweet. Great job writing this. Keep up the good work

[Michael X]

I really loike this because the glow and format form a unique, abstract
image of embrace, awsome job, keep it up.