Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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Our Hands

Our Hands

A Poem by life in a ne/on tube
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Based on a dream I had about my crush <3

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Puzzle piece hands fit together

Like yours and mine, intertwined

Revealing youthful love

While

Cogwheel hands interlock

Like yours and mine, combined

Two halves becoming whole

A magnetic pull for comforting hold

A longing to fill space between fingers

Yours and mine

Belong

© 2010 life in a ne/on tube


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awww. so cute. ( gee i wonder who this is about! hahaha jk ) love the poem. Bravo! so sweat!


Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this alot. It was simple and sweet. I like how you compared holding hands to puzzle pieces and that it rhymed. I like it very much. Thanks for sharing

Posted 13 Years Ago


I liked this a lot. It was so simple, yet carried such strong and evocative emotions. I really liked your wording in this piece, in particular the part about the interlocking cogwheel hands. I thought that you did a great job in capturing the nature of young love, and wrote it in such a sweet, heartfelt, and relatable way. Nice work,
~PaperHearts

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aw so sweet. Great job writing this. Keep up the good work

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really loike this because the glow and format form a unique, abstract
image of embrace, awsome job, keep it up.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 24, 2010
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Hey, just call me Kelsi! One word that pretty much sums me up: WEIRD. My friends are insane. I like to read, play video games, write (obviously), and play my piano. MUSIC CAN SAVE YOU, AND DON'T L.. more..

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