When We Grow Up

When We Grow Up

A Poem by I'llPlayTheJuliet

at what point in time do

Friends become Foes

Reality become Brutallity

Moments become Memories

Somewhere become Nowhere

Forever become For Today

When we grow up and relize

Foes are Friends

Brutallity is Reality

Memories are Moments

Nowhere is Somewhere

For today is Forever

© 2011 I'llPlayTheJuliet


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I'llPlayTheJuliet
Lammme.

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Interesting play with words.
Line #7, re"a"lize, not relize. (Simple flaw - major flaw eventually.)
Other than that, well done.
good write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love it :) not lame

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not lame. Beautiful, and heart-crushingly true.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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