Ghost's Dream

Ghost's Dream

A Poem by IAmGhost120
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Sometimes I have this dream where I'm just lying on the seafloor. It's so peaceful that I really wish it were possible to stop time and just lie there.

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I want to sink

To the bottom of the sea.

A stone,

Watching the fish swim by.

 

I want to lie

On those dark grey stones

At the bottom

Of the dark sea floor.

 

I want to escape

From this mundane life.

Grow gills, grow fins

Leap into the water

And swim forever away.

© 2012 IAmGhost120


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Interesting. I had similar dreams though mainly of soaring through the sky. Once or twice my wings falter sending me spiraling to the ground but I always stop beforehand.

I liked the last five lines the most. We all need a break once in a while and for most of us it can only happen in our dreams.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A soft, breezy little evocation of a dream of freedom. The whole piece I think has an aquatic, peaceful, wistful and cooling feeling to it. It sounds almost like a quiet prayer floating off unheard and answered...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Its interesting and I like how you have interpred a dream :) Good writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


That was a really good poem. I liked it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Interesting. I had similar dreams though mainly of soaring through the sky. Once or twice my wings falter sending me spiraling to the ground but I always stop beforehand.

I liked the last five lines the most. We all need a break once in a while and for most of us it can only happen in our dreams.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 8, 2011
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Tags: water, the ocean, Ghost, fish, Ghost's Dream

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So. You wanna know stuff about me, huh. Well, I'm a human, and I'm alive. I live on Planet Earth, which is in the Milky Way, and I live on a large landmass surrounded by ocean. I have a nose, two .. more..

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