The Broken Yolk Dripped From the Pan and Left the Meal

The Broken Yolk Dripped From the Pan and Left the Meal

A Poem by Chloe
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This is my first shot at minimalism. I wrote it in two minutes. This is written about the same person in "Here I Am". It's really weird.

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A rye on the cooker
that is where you'll look
I will raise my knife
I'll take you down down down
where you took me

 

I'm sure that I might hate you
but that it not what Mr. Board said
you are the one that I can't stand
you betrayed me
you are a selfish child

 

God is mad
the bacon fell
you are dead now
I just know it

 

Nonsense! nonsense!
your cousin is a poet
she is just not as good as I
and neither will you ever be
 

I hope you are gone now
because I blocked you on Myspace

 

Oh, Oh
I think I have fainted
a flash
maybe it's you running

 

You're gone gone gone
pathetic
pathetic
nothing
n
o
th
ing
to me at all
I hope that you leave

 

Family
Ha!
you don't care about anyone but yourself
and the Banjamins!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
 

Leave
leave leave leave leave leave leave leave
leave, b***h, leave!

 

Two diced up eggs
split over you
is that all you know
you are scrambled and over easy
hi high!
how are you?
enjoy your meal!
cause I know it's your last!!!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

© 2008 Chloe


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This was great! I loved the random sway of emotions and images in this piece. It was a mix of the board game clue combined with killer kitchen and the revenge of the pieced of girl. Unique and extreme in it's presentation and caught me up with a Beat him down, rah rah sis boom bah type mindset.

Great Write!
Truly Enjoyed!
Infinity's Shadow

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This was great! I loved the random sway of emotions and images in this piece. It was a mix of the board game clue combined with killer kitchen and the revenge of the pieced of girl. Unique and extreme in it's presentation and caught me up with a Beat him down, rah rah sis boom bah type mindset.

Great Write!
Truly Enjoyed!
Infinity's Shadow

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was pretty intreging. I especially love the title. How obscure. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Chloe
Chloe

Seattle, WA



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I am a 16-year-old young writer and I live in Seattle, Washington. I began writing when I was about nine. Then, I began to play some guitar and I realized that I had talent for music also. So poetry a.. more..

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