Hopeful Love

Hopeful Love

A Poem by Anastasia
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I just thought that this would be a nice first poem. I thought it was sweet and short.

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Here I sit,

Lost in my wistful thoughts of you,

Longing for you,

Wanting to be near you,

To hear and see you,

But alas,

I cannot,

For we are two worlds away,

And two worlds too is far for one’s love to cross,

For it needs the love of two,

To meet in the middle,

And be whole once again.

© 2018 Anastasia


Author's Note

Anastasia
This was the first poem I have ever written and genuinely liked, I hope I can get some constructive criticism.

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Distance make love seem impossible.
"For it needs the love of two,
To meet in the middle,
And be whole once again"
The above lines are true. Need two people near for love to bloom. Thank you Anastasia for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


For it needs the love of two,
To meet in the middle,
And be whole once again.

Indeed a hopeful love and
your poem deserves a standing applause!
#CLAPS

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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