Nature's Splendour

Nature's Splendour

A Poem by Inject Positivity

Lofty white clouds towering over
The sunny mountain like a soft cover
Standing tall against the winter showers
Flourishing like summer flowers

Halting over the valiant valley of snow
Where the sun sparkle with moderate glow
Applauding the elegance of nature's splendour
Human heart salutes nature in sheer wonder

© 2017 Inject Positivity


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Man! this one is rich in imagery. I can see what you describe so clearly... as if I was there. :) lovely

Posted 4 Years Ago


Knowing that you live at the base of the world's highest & most remote mountains, I can almost see how it must be & how it feels to have these majestic sentinels living nearby. Your poem expresses all the ways I've imagined the Himalayas & the powerful essence they must impart to your part of the world. Excellent job writing about a unique view . . . (((HUGS)))

Posted 4 Years Ago


You've painted such beautiful scenes. leading this reader's thought outdoors and into what truly is a winter-world's splendour. Wonderfully phrased, delightfully visual.

Posted 4 Years Ago


How many times do we look at a scene like this, but never really see it. Sometimes we are blinded by beauty. This is one of those times.

On a grammatical note, 'sparkle' needs to be plural 'sparkles'.

and perhaps drop the connective in the third line.
'Standing tall against the winter showers'
to
'Standing tall against winter showers'

Minor points really.
Well done, Dhiman. Good write.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Beautiful! Great prose that makes me wanna get outside and "solute nature's splendor" myself. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 4 Years Ago


A pretty picture and sweet to the soul :) I.I.

Posted 4 Years Ago


nice flow and rhythm . the choice of words and metaphors is stunning . loved every verse and every word ..
you could actually feel the breeze of air touching your skin
short but did the job .. maybe you could make it a little bit longer so it can be more enjoyable

Posted 4 Years Ago


You have created some lovely images for the reader, but more than that, the softness of your words drew me in. Beautiful writing :) Julie

Posted 4 Years Ago


Inject Positivity,
Dhiman, Your poem speaks the reality of how our hearts are somehow attracted to the life message of nature's beauty. Why does the person love to revel in "lofty white clouds towering over." or sun sparkle with moderate glow;" Yes you closing line proves how we are fit from the imprint of God within our souls to appreciate what the Lord has made! "Human heart salutes nature in sheer wonder." So beautiful and inspiring!........Hope things are going well for you in your neck of the woods...............Bless you and yours........................Kathy

Posted 4 Years Ago


bringing the inanimate to life....you did that here...

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Inject Positivity
Inject Positivity

WB , India



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Poet, naturalist, optimist. "Everyday is a blessing and an opportunity. Be grateful and keep moving ahead." "Life, well it stands between two different worlds, one that wants to keep it here a.. more..

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