Frosted

Jumbled mess of words that have a deep meaning...somewhere

 

Broken

We Are

Shattered

With delusions

Open

We Close

And Close We cry

Hardened by love

And love we die

Solid

I feign

While Apart We fall

Author's Note

I believe that my ending could've been stronger...

Reviews

[Capriciousoul]

Wow! Really nice poem!
"Shattered with delusions"
I really like that part because it's true
"Hardened by love and love we die"
This is very nice also.
I think the ending is really good. But if you think it could be stronger, review it again and add more!