MIrror

MIrror

A Poem by ICE
"

dark and light

"
Flowing, my heart dies
And I'm left without hope for another day.
Empty, here I lie
And i'm frozen to the bone
Sorrowful, i am left with the aching life,
And the cold dark night.
Alone, I am the "horseman of death"
And I have come.
Beyond, I am your worst nightmare
And you know its true.
I am what you made me,
And I am what you've become.
 
No matter how many times you shatter the mirror,
Our reflections are one.
You can't run,
And I can't hide.
We will always be side by side.
I the darkness,
And you my light.

© 2009 ICE


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This is amazing.. I found it deeply moving actually.. dark and light meets.... like daily lives flow and conjoin from night and day!!! I like your ending:

No matter how many times you shatter the mirror,
Our reflections are one.
You can't run,
And I can't hide.
We will always be side by side.
I the darkness,
And you my light

Like the days each need the other..it is also a true metaphor to being human as both darkness and light exist in all people! Thank you for sharing!!! =)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is so beautiful! I love the emotion and power in this write! Fantastic job, friend!

Posted 12 Years Ago


a powerful write, well writen

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is amazing.

The concept of it is so real and the words and the way it's written so beautifully thought out.

=)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is amazing.. I found it deeply moving actually.. dark and light meets.... like daily lives flow and conjoin from night and day!!! I like your ending:

No matter how many times you shatter the mirror,
Our reflections are one.
You can't run,
And I can't hide.
We will always be side by side.
I the darkness,
And you my light

Like the days each need the other..it is also a true metaphor to being human as both darkness and light exist in all people! Thank you for sharing!!! =)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a haunting piece. Your flow is amazing. Well penned. Almost a dream of sorts, and possibly the self loathing of one indivdual penned down very romanticlly. Well done. I can take this poem several ways.
xox
Cherri

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Without one, there is no other.
So true- we are all one and the same.

I like your style of creation here, and your thoughts represent the same view as mine; people are collective.

Nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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