Minimalistic

Minimalistic

A Poem by ICE

Feel every bit of this

Nothing,

As it leaves you

Cold and Alone

On the ground.

 

Smile and laugh.

Tell me things you

Don't really mean.

Lie and steal this

Heart.

Putting on a facade.

Always hiding what you

Truly feel.

 

I watch you ...

Merely observe.

Your movement is minimal

You face blank

And I know

You feel nothing at all.

 

Subtle movement

Rain falls

Arms move

Eyes shift

 

Feel every bit of this

Nothing

As it leaves you.

© 2009 ICE


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I feel sadness in this one? Deep sadness that has haunted the writer
for years and never seems to go away.
Cheer up Ice think of Ice Cream on a bright sunny day.
I know I'm taking the mood of the poem away........smiles,sorry
I did like what you wrote and we all get this feeling from time to time.
But we must not dwell there for long or our heart starts to harden.
I know they say " Who ever heard of a happy poet " but I think there can be.....smiles

Kelley

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is a sad poem...But very well written...Great job...

AA
Gregory

Posted 11 Years Ago


I feel sadness in this one? Deep sadness that has haunted the writer
for years and never seems to go away.
Cheer up Ice think of Ice Cream on a bright sunny day.
I know I'm taking the mood of the poem away........smiles,sorry
I did like what you wrote and we all get this feeling from time to time.
But we must not dwell there for long or our heart starts to harden.
I know they say " Who ever heard of a happy poet " but I think there can be.....smiles

Kelley

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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