Words in D minor

Words in D minor

A Poem by ICE

I'd give up everything

Just to have a taste

Of you.

I'd drop these fears

With the falling of tears

If you'd say you'd

Be mine.

I sit here

And watch you;

Letting you be

my inspiration

Tonight.

Soft sophistication.

A smile

Helps part your lips.

Broken as I am

Drawn to you

Rolling in your dark;

Shadows

Steal the light.

I lie here

And open my eyes

To the fact

That I've been only telling myself

Lies.

Indulging in guilty pleasures

Holding on to

What was never mine.

I breathe in slowly

Bide my time...

I can't put this

Into words

As efficiently

As you

Could.

© 2009 ICE


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This is very well written...You show emotion, as well as rhyme really well...Keep writting

As Always
Gregory

Posted 11 Years Ago


A serene, haunting, mystical piece...astounding in every way, friend. Beautiful write! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's smooth, like good yogurt. A warm breeze in a cold room.

-Drachke

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I'm a brooding poet who has been writing since middle school. My writing has a tendency of being rather dark...and I like it that way. I am female who is 20 years old and I'm currently in colle.. more..

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