Ill Defined

Ill Defined

A Poem by ICE

I'm surrounded

By worthless

Fingers and Toes.

Shrouded in darkness

A slave to my

Circumstance.

 

I am an

Inconsequential hue

Of a dissonant blue,

Leading a life

That has been

Constantly rained upon

By the light

In the sky

Of my circumstance.

I am an ill defined

Presence

Cold hands

And unspoken words

Floating in weighted silence.

Shrouded in darkness

By the light

Of these worthless

Fingers and toes.

A blue hue

Inconsequential and dissonant

Leading a life

Defined by my

Circumstance.

~Ice

© 2009 ICE


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Certainly can feel coldness and emptiness in this. I like that you don't tell us exactly what your circumstance is, because that leaves it open for many people in many different situations to identify with these feelings. I really like your line, "I am ill defined presence." That's a great way of putting so many people's feelings on their existance. This was really good!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Certainly can feel coldness and emptiness in this. I like that you don't tell us exactly what your circumstance is, because that leaves it open for many people in many different situations to identify with these feelings. I really like your line, "I am ill defined presence." That's a great way of putting so many people's feelings on their existance. This was really good!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I'm a brooding poet who has been writing since middle school. My writing has a tendency of being rather dark...and I like it that way. I am female who is 20 years old and I'm currently in colle.. more..

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