Understated

Understated

A Poem by ICE

With hard wrought

Denile hanging

In the air

There is nothing

Left to say;

Just tired excuses

Chocked full of

Regreat and tears

We forgot to shed.

© 2009 ICE


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Wow, ain't that the truth...lol... I especially liked the end "Chocked full of regreat and tears we forgot to shed...I think you spelled regret wrong though...Overall it was a very good write...

As Always
Gregory

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very simple, but good, I like this.

"tears We forgot to shed"
That line is the type that stays with you. Good job.

--Alisa_the_fluff_ball

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on October 13, 2009

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I'm a brooding poet who has been writing since middle school. My writing has a tendency of being rather dark...and I like it that way. I am female who is 20 years old and I'm currently in colle.. more..

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