Blue Cavern

Blue Cavern

A Poem by ICE

 

Its all an echo

Of things said before.

Did you catch the lie

Or did it just settle

In your throat?

Whether its pulling me up

Or tearing me down

Crying never was much fun,

Even the second time around.

Just look at me here

Pathetic and alone

Searching for a quirky

Little rhyme

Trying to buy time

For the hurt that

Boils inside

You know...

Its all an echo

© 2009 ICE


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"It's"... I know, I know, I'm a total grammer nazi sometimes. Other than that little irk, I really like this poem. It flows well but shifts organically between feels, very well structured. Great word choices as well.

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Added on November 30, 2009
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I'm a brooding poet who has been writing since middle school. My writing has a tendency of being rather dark...and I like it that way. I am female who is 20 years old and I'm currently in colle.. more..

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